Lapping up water
On all fours face in the creek
Deer downstream drinks too

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    1. Thank you. I just learned there’s a form of haiku called senryu, which I’m finding fascinating . . . seems like the senryu is haiku unrooted in nature metaphors moving the essence, which it turns out traditional haiku observes (the nature flow flowering so to speak . . . ). Bright blessings to you too ❤


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